Dbmwjo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[If...]

Beautiful

Really unique, a breath of fresh air for Newgrounds. The graphics were pretty good, although some of the drawings could have been done better. Style was the best part, the storytelling was very awesome. So much was said without saying almost anything, very nice job. Music was very nice, went along with the flash nicely.

Overall, a beautiful piece of flash. Very poetic feel to it, kudos.

[Santa Sells Out]

Very Nice

Product placement...wow. Anyways, the graphics were pretty impressive nice use of facial features to depict the personality of the characters. Style was nice in that you didn't use words to show what was happening very nice. Sound was pretty good, nothing wrong with it, the music went along but the lagging thing sorta makes it not as good. The humor was original and brought a smile to my face.

Overall, very nice job. Great depiction of coporate takeover. I liked it!

["target practice" W.W.W]

Good

I thought the flash was pretty good. The graphics were kinda bland but I realized that is because you were playing off Jeff's flash so it's excusable. Style was alright because you parodied off of the other flash nicely. Sound was okay, pretty funny voices. Finally, humor was the best part, I laughed at certain points which was nice. Especially the begining when the guy comes, and at the end.

Overall, a nice parody flash. Good job

[The Composer]

Pure Flash art.

I really really liked this piece. The graphics on this were hands down one of the best I have seen. If we put in order all the flashes based on graphics, this'd have to make the top 3. Literally that well done. The style is also amazing, great Noir style and story. The black and white, the pacing, the feel, everything is done to perfection. The only reason I didn't give the style a ten is because this style has been done. That isn't bad at all, it's just I have a sort of grid of what gets what and only brand new fresh excellent style recive 10s. But this style is still amazing. The sounds to me are the best part. The jazz sounds go very perfect with the feel and plays along with it. The music tells the story in subsitution of there being almost no dialog.

Overall, an amazing piece of work. Now on my list of favorites.

[Roadside Philosophy]

Hey I laughed.

I thought it was actually pretty darn funny. The graphics weren't anything special, it sorta looked dated and could use some improvement. The sound was alright, voice-acting wasn't done too good but it got the job done. And I already said it was funny, but it was nice that the jokes felt like they were new jokes and not already used jokes like in some flashes and stuff.

Overall it was alright. Could use some improvements, but it's still a good watch.

[Tinman]

Nice sad feel.

Very nice depressing flash. The graphics were done excellently although there is the mistake with his walking, but I can ignore it. Style is really good too, the story has been done many times to the point where it's almost a cliche. But you brought a new style to it with the robots plans and stuff. The sounds were very nicely done, the music also had the exact some tone as the flash so it went along with it really nicely.

Overall, a great depressing flash that I personally really liked.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Nice sad feel... for some reason that header makes me think of velvet.

Thanks for ignoring the problem with the walk. Heh, I feel pretty stupid about that already.

I'm happy that you liked my depressing flash(that sounds weird, doesn't it?).

Thanks for reviewing and the great score! :D

[Boy Machine]

Very nice Black Humor

I laughed, it was pretty funny. The graphics quality were really good, the background images were a little non-detailed but it looks to me that may have been intentional for a certain style. Speaking of the style, this style rocked. Perfect black and dark humor, nicely done. The sounds were pretty cool with the music being so out of place it actually really works, and the voice acting was perfect. Lastly, the humor was pretty funny, it was a really good unique joke.

Overall, very nicely done flash. Keep up the good work.

[coffee break]

That was cool...

and twisted. The graphics in this were pretty well done, although the last part with the blood looked a little weird. Maybe you shoulda spent a little more time with that part (and that part only). This has a really nice style of storytelling. I would've liked it if you didn't give the indication about the grim reaper, it's sorta telling too much and takes away a tiny bit of the experiance. Violence was nice except that part already mentioned (and I think this is a Mature flash, not a Teen).

So overall, this is a nice piece of flash with interesting style of story-telling. Nice job, keep it up.

[Bike Trip]

A little... pointless

So what was the point? The look of this was pretty low-quality, I can see that you were just having fun but I think you could've tried a teensy bit more. To me, the only aspect that doesn't recive a failing grade is the music as it does lighten up the mood and makes it bearable.

Basically it seemed like you didn't really make a big commitment when making it. It was alright though...I guess.

[Tin:The Incompetent Ninja]

You made that for school?

That's pretty violent for a school project. Anyways, the graphics in this are very nicely done, it moved smoothly and lloked good moving smoothly. I really liked the whole ninja black and white style to this and how the blood was the only thing colored, nice! The music went along with the flash perfectly, so good job with that. And like I said it was pretty violent, and what I liked was that it wasn't overly unrealistically violent, but wholesomly violent.

Overall, a very nice flash and you look like you have quite a lot of potential. I hope to see more from you!

SnafuDave responds:

Dude this review rocked. Thanks for the detailed response. I'll try my best to umprove on the next Flash project I make. Thanks a ton man! And yeah I turned it in for a school project. My teacher is the bomb diggity and liked it. He's such an awesome teacher.